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STORY #4

Postby Ace » Oct 19, '14, 6:47 pm

Since I didn't get the chance to post a story yesterday, I'll post 2 tonight...

STORY #4 - SOMEONE'S IN MY BED

I slowly creep into my daughter's dark room. I avoid turning on the lights as to not scare her. I'll admit, I can't really see anything but I have a good idea of where her bed is in proportion to her door. I feel around & feel her hair. I lightly brush it back with my fingers. I lean down & kiss her forehead.

"There's someone in my closet." my daughter says quietly. She sounds frightened.

"No there isn't."

"Yes there is. Please go check."

"I promise you that there is no one in the closet."

I head over to the closet & turn the light on. I completely freeze. I see my daughter curled up in a ball sitting in the closet.

"DADDY! SOMEONE'S IN MY BED...

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Re: STORY #4

Postby Hanley! » Oct 19, '14, 7:04 pm

Shit just got real! :O

That's pretty creepy. I actually want this to be a sequence in a full horror movie.
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Postby Viazon » Oct 19, '14, 7:25 pm

That's fine. Didn't want to sleep tonight anyway.
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Re: STORY #4

Postby Kein » Oct 20, '14, 12:46 pm

This is the best one so far. The clown was pretty good but this one is pretty cool.
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Re: STORY #4

Postby PorkChop » Oct 20, '14, 1:22 pm

Reminds me of Terminator 2 when the T-1000 impersonates Sarah Connor and John has to work out which is the real one.
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